It would be so nice if something made sense for a change

Tuesday, October 12, 2010

Mourning

A day back he lost his beloved! Through thick and thin, rain and shine she was with him for the last 12 years . Never betraying him, never nagging for a favour back in return. She was with him from the morning cups of tea to the after-dinner strolls in the balcony. She knew his secrets- the darkest to the silliest, often peeping in to the most private corners of his life. Lusty obsession she had become for him with time. A shoulder to lean on, she held his hand to light the first flicker of joy on days of merriment! Success seemed incomplete even with all the pats on his back, without pulling her close, to sink into the warmth of his awaiting lips. Challenges seemed tamed when she was by him. He knew she would leave but hoped against hope for the day to never come. Loneliness crept in the moment she left him for good. Seems unbelievable to not have her fragrance enveloping him through the days and nights, cuddling him in a smoky sheet of affection. True it is... She is no more there for him..gone forever.. his beloved bud of smoke, saving his life allowing him to cherish her memories healthily through the rest of his life!

7 comments:

  1. Awesome piece!!! True, Change is the ONLY constant of life... But how far do we manage to cherish those moments, once so intricately forming our lives, now just memories...?? Can we really do that?? Well, whether we can or not, I guess we should do that...else even those transient moments get lost into oblivion...and all those treasured moments appear to be fake reality...a ruthless injustice to the truth and honesty embedded in those moments which we had lived so fondly and fearlessly!

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  2. An honest effort. For the sake of being critical, I think I should say here that the build-up should always be optimal, not overdone.

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  3. You have got a gentle river-flowing essence in all your writings.The pictorial ecstasy helps me to build my own world of imagination...However it's really nice to read you.

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  4. Ey to puro Tomaake Chaai, guru! Jiyo!

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  5. Khubi bhalo hoyechhe. Kintu e niye tui eto dukkhu na korleo parti :D

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  6. khub shundor. besh bhalo. besh notun concept lekhar. achha suman chattopadhyay...???na na...

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