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Wednesday, September 22, 2010

An Erased Tale?


daag?...dhundte reh jaoge!
Eraser, mane chhotobelay jake “rubber” bole jantam… tar proti chhoto thekei ekta odbhut akorshon… mochhar proti na oi eraser dustgulor proti ta thik janina…tobe akorshonta irresistible...kodin age…office ashar shomoy rastay pithe bag newa golay corporate er boklosh jholano ekjon 30-35 bochhorer clean shaved shudorshon chhokrake dekhe kothao kichhu nei hothat kirokom school e thakakalin shosthir din shokaler gondho pelam…. Shekhan theke edik shedik kotha mathay ghurte laglo…thik jano ekta koutoy shobdogulo pure keu bNador-khela dekhan jara, tader haater dugdugir moto kore narachhe…chhotobelar kotha mone porte porte thamlo eshe shei eraser e... amar j kano ato eraser niye mathabyatha k jane... shei je camel er alphabet aNka aar chobi dewa shada mathata shobuj erasergulo hoto na...scented? seta je ki miss kori ki bolbo…hoyna bodhoy ekhon aar …koi dekhi na to!... tar por natarajer shadagulo...tarpor nil khape mora non dust... natarajer shadagulo chhilo chhotto rectangular….insignificant dekhte…r chhilo nanarokom shundor dekhte colourful eraser jegulo diye muchhlei kalo kalo hoey jeto r amon shokto je khata pray chhire jawar jogar hoto:)… kichhur abar nanarokom phol er shape hoto r gondho thakto ekta synthetic…bhallagto na gondhota motei… ei rongin gondho-dewa erasergulo beshirbhag khetrei pencil box er ebong porobortikale pencil bag er konay pencil-kata phool er sathe obohelay pore thakto…tader gunomaner opor nirdidhay obishwash kora jeto bolei bodhoy…! r jegulo bhalo muchhto…. Mane non-dust gochher ersaergulo… prothombar mochhar shomoy khub jotno bhore kono ek ogyato karone kono ekta kona bhNota kora diye shuru kora hoto mocha… khoye jawata dekhte ki? … ke jane… ar ekdhoroner “rubber” hoto… jeta sharpner ba chhotbelar “kol” er sathe thakto… gaye thakto ekta odbhut chhobi…jeta ekdike bNekale ekrokom r onyodike bNekale arekrokombhabe joljol korto… ei sharpner-cum-eraser er pechhone abar thakto ekta eraser-dust jharar brush … bejay moja petam eta sathe thakle… ajkal bodhoy egulo dekhe moja pawar shujog chhotora payna… pencil er pechhone chhotto nongra-mochhe amon eraser kintu ajo ache…. Kheyal rakhlei dekha jabe!bakigulo bodhoy shomoyer shonge shonge dhuye-muchhe saaf… ki jani…

5 comments:

  1. oshadharon lekha tomar :) amar moto bhulo mon-ero mone pore galo!

    amar favourite rubber-er photo tai tumi lagiyecho!:) nataraj/camel rubber-er pore eta bajar-e eshechilo.. ar tar-o pore faber-castle.. otao besh lagto.. but non-dust tai best...

    aro koekta points add korchi...(jani srimanti di-r moto guchiye likhte parbona...tao didi je sms kore reminder ta dilo abar.. na likhle ki na ki bolbe abar ke jane!)

    1.rubber-er opor naam lekha.. hijibiji aNka.. ar shada rubber pen-er kali diye nil kore fele tai diye chardike chhap-chhop korteo darun moja lage.. :D

    2.ink-eraser ... blue colour-er shokto-pokto.. either gol-gol.. nahole lomba... ar tar sathe attached duster.. tobe ha.. oita diye muchlei shob kamon kalo-i hoye jeto :( [oboshyoi tokhon pencil-e lekha pata-i muchechi.. tai hoyto! :D ]
    ei ink-eraser niye boka-o koto kheyechi.. ogulo office theke nitam ar ferot dite bhule jetam !:D

    3.punching machine ar ink pad-er katha ei shob chotobelar katha-y add kortei hochche :)

    joto kagoj pabo shob kota tei oi gol gol hoye jeto (na na.. sorry ..akhono jay) jodi shamne thake ekta punching machine :D ar tarpor onek kaj korar por dhakni ta khullei kotto gol-gol tukro! ogulo tarpor eksathe uriye dite khub bhalo lagto.. jodio ghore orale additional bokuni hoy :( ar baranda theke niche felle oshadharon lage dekhte :)

    ar ink-pad-e stamp niye chardike joto kagoj... even dewal.. shob jayga tei nijer stamp marbar por bokuni-ta ekhono mone ache ... ar khali stamp na.. hath gulo-o nil nil kore hath-er-o chhap ditam... ar even likhtam ..'ei chinhe vote din' :D

    ar ki ki jano chilo ei lekha-r list-e.. mone-i porchena ! amar bhulo mon back in action dekhchi! :(

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  2. @srimanti di & madhu 2jon e oshadharon likhechho....shotti karer chhotto belar kotha mone pore gelo

    amar favourite chhilo alphabet lekha eraser aar tarpor a non-dust :) [alphabet lekha gulo ekhon ar pawa jayna :( ]

    aar amar stamp r shokh to onek boro bela porjonto chhilo (ekhono achhe mone hoy) koto bolechhilam baba k 1ta baniye dite (jei dokan a baba lighter/watch thik korato otay pawa jeto)...keu deyni...tai oi experience ta nei but pele erom e kortam sure :)

    aar chhilo chhoto belay teacher howar shokh (ekhon jeta bhablei bhoy lage)nijer ar didi r purono khata gulo niye koto invisible student j poriyechhi :D tader jonno abar 1ta attendance register o chhilo :D

    bah ei post ta te comment o post er motoi boro hochhe :)

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  3. amar darooooon legechhe!!!! amar chhotobelar green matha shada body, alphabet lagano, scented eraser mone pore gyalo..ar taar-i shathe gota aashir dashaker chhelebela ta! :-)

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  4. আগে খারাপগুলো:
    বাংলায় লিখলে বাংলা হরফ নয় কেন?
    এত ellipsis (...) কেন?
    প্যারাগ্রাফ কই?

    এবার...
    মোক্ষম জায়গায় আঘাত করেছিস; এক ধাক্কায় ২০-২৫ বছর আগের স্মৃতিগুলো মনে করিয়ে দিয়েছিস্‌, বেশ অনেকক্ষণ বসে বসে ভাবলাম নানারকম। মনে আছে, সবুজ-সাদাগুলোর ওপর একটা পাতলা, প্রায় স্বচ্ছ আস্তরণ থাকত, উঠে আসত? আরও কত কি মনে পড়ল...

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  5. shobai shob bhalo kotha bole felechhe... ami khali 3 te kotha bolbo... Jar shesh duto lekhar modhye insignificant kintu amay emon naRa diyechhe je likhe felchhi :D
    1) ei bishoyta bachhar jonye toke thank you :D
    2) Pencil-kata phul --- amar chhotobelar shonge ga gheshagheshi kore achhe aajo
    3) Sharpner-er bangla "kol" --- ei lingo ta ekshomoy roj byabohar hoto... ar aaj bhulei gechhi? E kisher khela?
    Srim... Love you for this post.

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